tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2147373376866432115.post3232297089013393657..comments2023-10-18T02:16:32.812+11:00Comments on Zoe's Social Psych Blog: Blog 1: The interrelatedness of prejudice, stereotyping and aggressionZPeelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03813225662389103047noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2147373376866432115.post-77565136145980358242010-11-11T21:00:52.153+11:002010-11-11T21:00:52.153+11:00I found here few new stereotyps of aggresion. ativ...I found here few new stereotyps of aggresion. <a href="http://www.buyativanonline.org/" rel="nofollow">ativan</a>Eltonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10409795398087639790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2147373376866432115.post-33875445382135387352007-10-03T21:38:00.000+10:002007-10-03T21:38:00.000+10:00Official Essay FeedbackOverallAn outstanding piece...<B>Official Essay Feedback</B><BR/><BR/>Overall<BR/>An outstanding piece of work on one of the hardest topics. You have targeted the question directly, but were challenged in terms of qualitatively exploring research evidence and expanding upon some of the theories you examined. Excellent work overall.<BR/><BR/>Theory<BR/>You highlight well a host of interconnected theories and provide explanatory links. I felt you had targeted the main concepts well and explained them where possible. As you acknowledge a more in-depth analysis of how some of the theories inter-related and effect each other would have greatly enhanced the power of your model. I felt you did justice to such a complex question. Well done.<BR/><BR/>Research<BR/>Research evidence for your theories was somewhat limited. Although your refer to key studies in conformity, obedience etc, you do not adequately reference these resources or expand upon how they enhance our understanding of the model. It is difficult to find appropriate research given the complexity of your task but smaller supporting studies of claims you make would of enhanced your narrative. On this note you (like many of your colleagues) tended to over-rely on Baumeister & Bushman, which should serve as a springboard for directions to pursue further research.<BR/><BR/>Written Expression<BR/>Your writing style is quite direct and well composed. I applaud your excellent use of hyperlinks to make information more reliable but I felt you over-relied on these, which caused you to miss an examination of the concepts in detail and then to draw the variety of concepts together. On the flip side your appendices were outstanding and provided a wealth of information. Your headings were appropriately titled, but italics would be in APA styles as would the journal names in your reference list. It is evident from your concept map and writings that you have grasped the complexity of the essay topic and done it justice in just under 1500 words. This topic could easily become the work of a thesis. Well done on excelling in such a challenging topic.<BR/><BR/>Online Engagement<BR/>Your online engagement has been exemplary. I have no suggestions for further effort as your mark suggests. Well done!Orangehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06505161230780190238noreply@blogger.com