Hi Everyone, this is my blog 1 draft - it may be a bit all over the place as I still need to edit and check structure etc but I wanted to post it to see if I could get any feedback! Any comments welcome.
Thanks.
Introduction
Prejudice,
stereotyping, discrimination and intergroup
aggression have traditionally been thought of as socially relevant and highly important components for research (Harrington, 2003/04). Prejudice, stereotyping and aggression are interrelated concepts which influenced each other within history and continue within today’s society. These concepts are evident within society and have been documented in film, ghosts of Rwanda, following the Rwandan Genocide; and Australian Eye, a documentary of
Jane Elliot's work. Added is a brief video from ghosts of Rwanda.
2 comments:
A couple of quick comments:
- Give your essay a meaningful, descriptive title
- Some of the paragraphs look very long
hey zoe,
you make some good points and comparrisons. I noticed you have hyperlinks to wikipedia. Are we able to do this? I hope so cause I have a few things that i want to link but i wasn't sure if we were able to use it.
good luck with ur work, long night ahead for all im assuming!
I like how you put the youtube clip in that works really well =)
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